Re-structure section 1
From the review feedback "accepted for publication with minor revisions":
I would remove the subheadings 1.1, 1.2 and 1.3 (this will depend a bit on the journal that you are going to submit). Also because your section 1.2 is in a way a bit of literature review.
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If so, also remove the internal references at the end of subsection 1.3!
Explanation by email:
The comments on subheadings indicate the structuring of your manuscript. Generally it is good to have a intro paragraph before a subheading X.1 appears. If you have only a few sentences, does it really require a subheading? Or can it be ‘just’a paragraph in a section?
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