Nicer formulation.

source/about/index.html

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ title: About Us
               <h4>Values</h4>
               We care about giving back to the rest of the GitLab community, that is why we give most code back to the <a href="https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab-ce/">Community Edition</a>.
               We try to be open, that is why this website is maintained in <a href="https://gitlab.com/gitlab-com/www-gitlab-com/">a public repository</a>.
-              We realize that GitLab is more than this organization, an example of this is the people outside GitLab.com in the <a href="https://www.gitlab.com/core-team/">core team</a>.
+              We realize that GitLab is more than this organization, an example of this is are the people from outside this company in the <a href="https://www.gitlab.com/core-team/">core team</a>.
               We think good code can be written by anyone, we encourage diversity by contributing to <a href="http://railsgirls.nl/">RailsGirls NL</a>.
               We try to correct the mistakes we make, please give us a chance by <a href="mailto:sales@gitlab.com">emailing us</a>.
               <h3>Team</h3>