Language
Language anyone can understand. Attempt at lowering barrier of entry/use and instilling confidence.
Targeting the least amount of time figuring things out, and knowledge to do so.
- Causal explanations.
- Obvious fluff removed.
- Verbosity closer to minimum.
- Redundant uses of "Successfully" gone.
- Distinction between updates and upgrades.
- Repo/sitory changed to "package storage".
- Consistent use of "e-mail".
- Consistent use of "swap", "trade" removed.
- "Application/s" shortened to "app/s".
- Configure changed to "set up" and "enter"
- "Install" not used as noun.
- "download traffic" changed to "incoming traffic".
- Self-referencing F-droid removed.
- Removed use of "we" in non-sentient part of the program.
- "Free" (as in non-freeware/freedom) changed to libre to avoid confusion with "gratis".
- No shouting at user with "!", unless important.
- "nearby" changed to "Nearby" to signify named program function.
- "Factory version" changed to "version that came with your device".
- Tip for how to get QR-code scanning working added.
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