Clean up copy on new hire day one page
Cleans up general grammar, punctuation, extraneous words on the New Hire Day One page.
Changes:
- 'with' to 'within'
- 'Note- ' to 'Note: '
- Adds period to end of sentence
- Deletes extra 'with'
Do not update/delete: Banner broadcast message test data
Do not update/delete: Notification broadcast message test data
Cleans up general grammar, punctuation, extraneous words on the New Hire Day One page.
Changes: